Blameless as the daylight that crawls through each morning, Carter and Caitlyn shook hands in the Arby’s parking lot, just across from the church.
VIRTUAL hug? Have you SEEN your pics? I'm bookin' a flight!😮 (One typo, referring to bottles, 'big does' instead of big dose.)
When he fired, I audibly gasped. You do such a good job of putting the reader in his head!
Caitlyn probably just had to help Ricky move a couch or something
That was gripping.
I loved that opening line, immediately hooked
Thank you so much Ian!
This was dope! really enjoyed this take. The atmosphere was on point as well. Don't really have any criticism to give! great little story!
Damn, lovely!
Jesus Christ.
(High praise)
VIRTUAL hug? Have you SEEN your pics? I'm bookin' a flight!😮 (One typo, referring to bottles, 'big does' instead of big dose.)
When he fired, I audibly gasped. You do such a good job of putting the reader in his head!
Caitlyn probably just had to help Ricky move a couch or something
That was gripping.
I loved that opening line, immediately hooked
Thank you so much Ian!
This was dope! really enjoyed this take. The atmosphere was on point as well. Don't really have any criticism to give! great little story!
Damn, lovely!
Jesus Christ.
(High praise)